Are you writing your first draft?
Revising your second or third draft?
Editing your final version?
Maybe you are in the early phases of getting the story that
keeps you up at night down on paper.
It doesn’t matter.
You will soon learn that in order to be good at writing, you need to
know a few simple math operations. Specifically, you need to be able to ADD,
SUBTRACT, MULTIPLY, AND DIVIDE. You also need to know when to employ these
operations to produce the outcome you need.
I am editing Libby’s Cuppa Joe, a short novel about a single
mother who owns a coffee shop in Door County, Wisconsin. I am revising Karen’s
Story, the novel about a woman who finds herself forever “in the middle.” I am
still crafting the second draft of the Edge of Quiet, a romantic suspense
novel.
I looked at my list of what I needed to do. “Add this,
delete that. Divide the chapter [HERE].” I realized how often I use math
terminology. So today I offer this post
as a friendly reminder –a strategy to use to evaluate your work and assess the
work that needs to be completed to make it publishable.
ADD
When it is good to ADD: Add words, characters or dialogue to
strengthen a scene or bump up the tension. For example, while working with my
editor on Breathing on Her Own, she
encouraged me to add more sightings of the strange white car in Laney’s
neighborhood. She wanted me to do this to make my readers curious about who
might be stalking Laney. Adding this enhanced the tension in the story.
There are times when ADDING is not preferable. It is not
good to “ad to pad.” For instance, you hear a certain agent likes works that
fall somewhere between 80,000- 100,000 words. Your story falls short at 65,000
words. Resist the temptation to add
“words” merely to get to what you perceive to be a magical word count. When I
taught college classes I would have students ask, “How long does our paper have
to be, Dr. Waters?” My response? “Until it is finished. No more. No less.” At
first they struggled with my answer, but as they came to know me, they realized
the freedom of writing without a word count or page requirement. The size of
the papers varied, depending on each student’s writing style.
SUBTRACT
When it is good to SUBTRACT: You need to delete superfluous verbiage;
crazy long, useless descriptions. Cut, edit, and revise details that do not
move the story forward. Your story needs to be lean and focused.
However, be careful that when you cut that character from
scene one, you don’t refer to him in scene two.
When I make drastic cuts to my manuscript, I keep them in a “dump”
document so I can retrieve valuable information later if I need it.
MULTIPLY
It’s good to offer multiple conflict points or situations
for your protagonist. I create a list of the ten worst things that could happen
to my main character. Multiplying these tough situations in your characters
life will intensify your reader’s desire to see your character pull through to
a satisfactory end.
The multiply rule doesn’t apply to some areas of your novel
–particularly if you are a new writer. Be careful to not include multiple
characters to track with multiple story lines or multiple characters with names
that begin with the same letter or are so similar your reader is confused.
DIVIDE
Last week, in the post about pacing, I suggested one way to
keep your story moving forward and your reader interested is to keep your
chapters short. One way to accomplish this is to DIVIDE those longer chapters
into more manageable chunks. That is a good use of your division skills.
However, I’ve met new writers who don’t put their best in
their first novel, hoping to save choice ideas and scenes for a sequel. Wake
up. You don’t need to divide your story up into book 1, 2, and 3. Not yet. Put
your best writing forward from the beginning. Make book one great.
So there you have it. Simple math to help you with your
novel.
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